Review: Comus, by John Kinsella, John Milton
Kit Fan, Life in Art, Poetry Review 99:1 Spring 2009
Decoding Milton's chastening masque about chastity into an exhilarating environmental dialogic poem of the twenty-first century, John Kinsella recasts Comus as an out of control
genetic scientist, an unethical bio-engineer
addicted to Viagra and committed to years of research and pleasure
, knowing the gene that awakes / fields of rape
. Comus's counterpoint and snare, the Lady
, becomes an eco-warrior who pities his artificial magic
and self-asserting rhetoric
, sharply pinpointing that something is rotten in the state of science - the new sublime of waste / and desecration
that teeters on the edge / of holocaust
. The effect is a powerful rendering of Milton's sexually perverse Comus into a moving ecological play that evokes the pastoral beauty of English and Australian landscape (the green vine that winds its way / along the small hill on the wood's edge
) and the atrocity of the synthetic sublime (the cycle of plasma greenery, worship / of cars and technology
). As Kinsella succinctly puts it in the Afterword: the basic sexual hypocrisy of the abuse of the land
.
Despite Kinsella's direct approach of Milton's cybernetic / folktale
, the question at the heart of the play is much more challenging than it first seems: when war
strikes at the heart of forests
, how, on the perplexing / path of 'sustainability'
, can we find a way for a science / that co-exists with forests
? The answer, if any, might be found in Sabrina's song, which Tim Cribb identifies in his brilliant introduction as a bond
and continuity between the masques by Milton the republican regicide
and Kinsella the vegan anarchist
. Two Sabrinas synchronise to invoke an antediluvian world of beasts and changing landscape. Whilst Milton's Sabrina sings to save
, Kinsella's wishes to recover
, a beautifully tuned word that signals change and recuperation.